Week 11 Story: The Magical Cow

(A picture of some very cute 'Guernsey' cattle. Guernsey is a type of cattle. Image can be sourced here).

The most updated version of this story can be found here: https://sites.google.com/view/indianepicsgalore/the-magical-cow


Long ago in a village lived a grandmother, granddaughter, and their. The three were once part of a larger family that had a lot of wealth, but lost it when their village. The mother had given up many possessions for food, but she was running out of ideas. She was too old to work and her granddaughter too young. She realized she would have to give up their beloved cow as it was the only valuable thing they had. She did consider using the cow for food, but she could not imagine doing so as the cow was like a second grandchild.

The grandmother took the cow to a local merchant. The merchant carefully inspected the cow, ensuring there were no defects. He fed the cow some lettuce, and notice while the cow was eating some of its saliva got on his hands. The merchant had severe burn scars on his hand from childhood, and notice they magically disappeared with the saliva. Quickly he realized this cow was magical, but did not want to tell the grandmother so he could purchase the cow for cheaper. He told her the cow was old and worthless. His plan was to convince her of the cow's low-worth and then later buy it for a cheaper price.

The grandmother, felt dejected by this merchants comments. She contemplated whether she should approach another merchant only to hear the same response, but then was reminded of her grandmother and convinced herself to garner the courage to. She approached a crippled merchant inquiring about the cow.

"Dear sir, I hope you may have some change to offer for my darling cow. She may be old, but she is sturdy and in good-health. I treasure her but feel guilty keeping her after looking into my starved granddaughters eyes." said the grandmother.

The cow licked the merchant's crippled leg. Instantly, he felt sensations in his leg that he hadn't felt in years. When he looked down, he saw his atrophied leg was now muscular and youthful. He tried walking on it, and to his amazement, was able to walk on it.

"My god! Since birth I have been unable to properly walk with this leg. Your cow is a healer with magical powers! Of course I will take her, but only if you insist? I am not a mere merchant, but the brother of the king. I feel cooped up in the headquarters which is why I travel from village to village, interacting with people. I can take this cow with me and heal as many people as I can. I of course will compensate, much more than some spare change."

The grandmother was ecstatic. She no longer felt guilty for selling the cow for money. She knew the cow would do more good healing others in various places than in her home. She agreed to the merchants offer and was off.

The first merchant approached her again while she was walking home. She informed him she already sold the cow and of its powers. He acted surprised but internally felt a surge of burning regret.

AUTHORS NOTE:
I based this story on The Merchant of Seri. My story was pretty similar to the original in terms of characters (the grandmother, grand-daughter, and two merchants) with a pretty similar plot. The main difference is that instead of a cow, the original uses a golden bowl. I figured the grandmother would have been aware of the golden bowl's price. I felt that being wealthy at one point, she would have been aware of what gold is and its price. I picked a cow partly as a tribute to Indian culture but I also thought selling the cow to do good makes for a more "feel-good" story.  I liked the overall message of greed so wanted to keep that message.

BIBLIOGRAPHY:
Title: The Merchant of Seri
Author: Ellen C. Babbitt


Comments

  1. Hi Maya!

    I never read the original story but I think I should go read it now. I like that you replaced the golden bowl with the cow thought. Cows are so important to Indian culture so I think that addition was very thoughtful. I'm glad that your story has an overall teaching to not be greedy. Greed is something that is so overlooked but so present in our culture today. The world tells us to do whatever we need to do to make a lot of money, while it is way more important that we do what is better for the people around us.

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  2. Great story and lesson of how greed gets you nowhere. Who in their right mind is such a cheap person that they pass up on a magical healing cow that could probably bring someone back from near death, helllllo??? I almost wish the merchant's reaction was worse, more mad. He should beat himself up over that forever. I'm also surprised the grandmother just sold the magical cow and didn't think greedily of it, you usually don't see such good-minded people in the world.

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  3. Hey Maya,
    I loved the amount of detail and tone in your story. It was very pleasant and kept me engaged. I love how you stuck with the theme about how cows are sacred in India. Keeping that Indian sentiment definitely kept me engaged throughout the story. Overall, I really enjoyed your story and am looking forward to reading more of your stories.

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  4. Hey Maya,

    I really enjoyed how you retold this amazing story. It was just similar enough where I knew which story you were writing about, but it still felt like the first time I was reading it because of the changes you made. My only wish is that you wrote more on when the first merchant comes back to buy the cow, as I always loved imagining how he reacted when he realized that his greed got the best of him, but that's just me. Great read!

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